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the shining sun in the day sky
and the moon glow at night
the eclipse is where they meet
so that the future is bright

but nobody knows, nobody cares
for the stars that fall down there
they will not return again
the eclipse is why
all of the dwellers cry

see the sun!
see the moon!
see the stars!

sometimes you will see a star shooting down
all of their dreams torn at the seams
what does it all mean?
look!

do you want to figure out how
you could make change right now?
take my hand and you shall see
the world of Elementary

now you have heard and caught a glimpse
you can cross through the eclipse
can the stars return again
and get back to the sky?
or are they left to die..?
for :iconaph-elementary:

now you know why i don't really do poems

i suck at them

oh well

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LKeiko Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
r u kidding me? Ur way better then me.

Know what my first poem was titled as? "Why are you such a Bitch?" and it had rhyming words such as cart and smart.
Yeah, it was hideous. My rl friends laugh at it every time they remember XD
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melonstyle Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
...I WANT TO READ THIS POEM OMGGG
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LKeiko Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS POEM IS LOST FOREVER

no seriously, I wrote it in a notebook and Im not sure if my mom threw it away
I wonder if my friends still remember the whole schpeel. I'll have to ask VvV
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